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Morien18

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Beautiful.

I leave you alone for a couple years, and I find you again with this? You've brought me the inspiration to keep posting my remixes on the portal. The guitars are great, the transitions are wonderful, and the solo, holy crap, the solo! You've taken a great piece and once again, made it your own. Great job.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks! Don't stop doing what you're doing! \m/

Hate me if you want, but here goes nothing...

You've got something going on here, but it doesn't quite hold as well as other variations of this piece. It would seem to be off-beat, but I'm willing to bet that it's not the artist's fault, so to say, but the "instrument". Honestly, I had my hopes up at the intro, but as the rest of the song rolled along, it lost it's power that the intro hit me with.

Also, the bass pedal disappeared. and the drum beat started clashing with the song. The final part where you combined two parts of the songs didn't get you far either, I'm afraid.

Some work needs to be done here if you want this to have some HONEST reviews on this song, and not just the ass-kissings of your fans based on your previous works. Not that it's your fault people resort to that.

Quite nicely done

I specifically loved the percussion. It really specified the genre in my opinion. If there was anything I could ask to change, I'd say that try to make it have a bit more... power. Either it starts small and continues to rise in it's delivery, The original song (being like most rock songs) had a performance style made to grab hold of the listener and never let go. I love what you have right now, but by making it have a strong, confident feel to it, This could be even more awesome.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks for the review and tips, it does lack a little climax>>
The only part that really breaks it up is the piano part.

I'm surprised...

that you even managed to fool anyone with this. This song's been around way longer than when you submitted it. And the fact that you've tagged it as your own work doesn't convince me. From what I understand (and still somewhat question), This is a cover done by none other than Metallica.

I also took a look at the other song you had submitted, which was the EXACT same soundtrack that would play if you were playing the game. I don't know if you thought no one would notice, but the inevitable happened.

I'm sure that all that I said up to this point will either be ignored or said as a "bad review', but at least try to remember this; Please try to take original songwriting a little more seriously. Don't take songs that you think are unknown and slap them as your own.

Thank you for your time to read this,
=+Morien+=

LOL

I'd originally give you an 8, until I recognized the program you used for this. XD 2 points for using Garage Band like me and it's lack of decent sounds.

Very nice.

I love how it all comes together. It's also not too repetitive, so that's a plus. I'm looking forward to your next submission! ^_^

Box-Killa responds:

Awesome :D If you like my stuff, pm me and i will give you a list of some of my good songs :D. I will have to make my next submission extra special, just for you. Thanks for the review, peaceout!

*nod*

When it comes to the guitar, you certainly know how to grab my attention. Listening to it makes it feel somewhat of an agent thing or something along those early 80's movies. I greatly enjoyed it. ^_^

Metaljonus responds:

lol I love old 80's cop drama music.

wtf?

I really dont see why you have such a low score for this song. It's not bad at all, especially considering your first try. Of course, it is a bit random for my tastes... I would mainly stick to one speed, and the slow part seemed to be going well for you. Overall, it's an alright song, but I wouldn't expect people asking you to put this in their work. But don't give up, keep trying! ^_^

bigbeek responds:

thanx for the review and response most of my work i put here on NG is spare time when im bored i love it when people say good things but i dont always expect the best rating

hardcore

This is very well made, despite that there is no bass. It brings a powerful feeling deep inside you, ya know?

Also, for a song title, either HeadStomper or Suck Mah Balls! XD second one was just a bullshit one, but you get the picture, i bet!

Nice

It's a soft, soothing song... really powerful as well. A bit too slow for my liking, but I won't let that hinder how good the song really is. looking forward to your next work!

I am now attempting my hand at voice acting. I will see what time will do for me! ^_^

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