Hate me if you want, but here goes nothing...
You've got something going on here, but it doesn't quite hold as well as other variations of this piece. It would seem to be off-beat, but I'm willing to bet that it's not the artist's fault, so to say, but the "instrument". Honestly, I had my hopes up at the intro, but as the rest of the song rolled along, it lost it's power that the intro hit me with.
Also, the bass pedal disappeared. and the drum beat started clashing with the song. The final part where you combined two parts of the songs didn't get you far either, I'm afraid.
Some work needs to be done here if you want this to have some HONEST reviews on this song, and not just the ass-kissings of your fans based on your previous works. Not that it's your fault people resort to that.